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LO4: Final Article

What we seek, we can find! Yoga has been around for as long as 5000 years ago and originated from India. There is no hard evidence to say yoga started this long ago however earliest archaeological evidence of Yoga's existence could be found in stone seals which depict figures of Yoga Poses.   Yoga teacher Lydia Ainscough will discuss her thoughts about yoga and questions many people ask her when they first join or are interested in joining yoga classes. Lydia has been teaching yoga for a couple years now and started while she was going through a very stressful year so thought yoga was the way to solve it. She works in a yoga studio called ‘Unity’ at Carver House in the heart of Sheffield, which began over a year ago and has become popular within the community. She also has her own Facebook page with over 500 likes and all 5 star reviews!   Yoga classes can sometimes be very expensive so it’s a good idea to start learning yoga at home in your own comfort, as a beginner

LO4: Regulation

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My article will be published in a magazine about health, so I will need to follow the editor’s code of practice. The first editor’s code of practice what would need to be regulated when reading through my article would be ‘Accuracy’ I need to make sure all information given in the article is accurate as I got information from how yoga helps our body from a survey it should all be quite accurate, as the people who participated in the yoga survey will know what it does. They get the information either from the internet of their yoga teacher etc. who have studied on what yoga does to help your body. I also got information from websites on where it was originated from http://www.tibetanlife.com/where-did-yoga-originate.html  I had to make sure I mention that there is no hard evidence as it is impossible to find out exactly when yoga came into place. The second regulation would be 'Privacy' because I need to make sure no information about Lydia’s social life has be

LO4: Mode Of Address and Structure

The purpose of my article is to inform the audience about facts about yoga, therefore as the article would be published in a health magazine the audience would be people who are interested in yoga or the 'health type magazine' target audience so a mass auidence of both men and women aged 16-50 of an ABC1 social grade The article is talking about Lydia Ainscough who is a yoga teacher answrering questions from an interview I conducted with her. The article is set in Sheffield as this is where her studio is for people to join. "What we seek, we can find!" was wrote on the 23rd of May 2017 to inform people about where yoga came from, benefits of yoga and settling the mthys about it so people who might be worried to start doing yoga will change their mind, she is doing this through using positive connotations of yoga to influence more people to start to have a happy life like she does The mode of address I have used to write my article is peer to peer as i am getting p

LO4: Sub Editing

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After reading the comments made on my draft I edited it to get it to a distinction grade What we seek, we can find! Yoga has been around for as long as 5000 years ago and originated from India. There is no hard evidence to say yoga started this long ago however earliest archaeological evidence of Yoga's existence could be found in stone seals which depict figures of Yoga Poses. Yoga [VA1]   [EM2]   teacher Lydia Ainscough will discuss her thoughts about yoga and questions many people ask her when they first join or are interested in joining yoga classes. Lydia has been teaching yoga for a couple years now and started while she was going through a very stressful year so thought yoga was the way to solve it. She works in a yoga studio called ‘Unity’ at Carver House in the heart of Sheffield, which began over a year ago and has become popular within the community. She also has her own Facebook page with over 500 likes and all 5 star reviews! Yoga classes can

LO4: First Draft

Yoga and all your questions answered Yoga teacher Samuel Cody will discuss his thoughts about yoga and questions many people ask him when they first join or are interested in joining yoga classes Yoga classes can sometimes be very expensive so it’s a good idea to start learning yoga at home in your own comfort, as a beginner this might even calm your mind and body as you are not around other people who you feel might judge you- which they won’t! Here is some advice for you beginners out there: Never judge yourself to anyone else this makes it seem like yoga is a competition-, which it is not. Doing this will make you more focused on your own posture therefore improving on each session you attend. Many beginners are scared to start yoga because of all the myths so Samuel is here to settle them. What are the health benefits of yoga? Yoga is good at working as an acupressure, Through bends/twists/hold/postures we are pressing very important points in o

LO3: Be able to research and plan content for an article **

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This is where I planned my content to what would be happening in my article I have made a survey using survey monkey to get answers for my article, I then sent it to my yoga teacher who suggested putting it on her facebook wall for her friends to complete and I got 29 responses which has been very helpful. I didnt have any problems doing this because I sent my survey to three people at first who teach yoga and I aksed them to help me by sending it to anyone they know who also participates in yoga Planning the article: Sport Music Entertainment Community Eductaion Animal Care Politics Mindmap three ideas from topics above. Write what sources you could access to get information about these Health- Article about yoga- unity yoga new yoga place do a vaiety of different types of yoga, interview with woman who runs the classes asks about how successful it has already been,also promoting people to go to it. Music- Interview with brothers band is primary

LO2: Know the construction and content of news articles **

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